rEFLECTION SHEET 2
Assignment : Writing Exam 1
Standard : W 6.1
1. This assignment relates to the standard because this writing exam was about persuading. We had to say that if an emperor should share their own ideas to the empire. Also, we had to say that what kind of ideas did an emperor share ( the ones we have learned in history class such as Cyrus and Hammurabi). Cyrus shared his empire by using toleration. Also, Hammurabi shared his empire by setting the code of law for his people to obey.
2. Here are the following steps :
a. I studied the sheet that had all the information about the emperors.
b. I also studied by notes for persuading and the organization of the paragraphs.
c. I read the question carefully so that I could write my essay.
d. I wrote why an emperor should share his ideas to the empire and gave some examples of emperors.
3. This assignment demonstrates that I'm able to persuade. I understand how I should persuade to make the reader believe me. Also, to convince people. I understand what kind of ideas an emperor made to make his empire entertaining. Also, I know the way to write an essay.
4. I could have improved by writing even more. Also, I could have expanded more ideas to make my essay better. It would be much better if I used a lot of vocabulary words. Over all, I could have made my essay better.
5. I can apply this to the real world when I'm an adult because in university, I'll be writing essays. Also, probably I'll will be writing persuasive essays. When I write, I'll have to know what paragraphs I'm going to write. They include introduction, 3 bodies, and a conclusion. I will use some persuasive skills so that my teacher can see that my essay is really good.
Standard : W 6.1
1. This assignment relates to the standard because this writing exam was about persuading. We had to say that if an emperor should share their own ideas to the empire. Also, we had to say that what kind of ideas did an emperor share ( the ones we have learned in history class such as Cyrus and Hammurabi). Cyrus shared his empire by using toleration. Also, Hammurabi shared his empire by setting the code of law for his people to obey.
2. Here are the following steps :
a. I studied the sheet that had all the information about the emperors.
b. I also studied by notes for persuading and the organization of the paragraphs.
c. I read the question carefully so that I could write my essay.
d. I wrote why an emperor should share his ideas to the empire and gave some examples of emperors.
3. This assignment demonstrates that I'm able to persuade. I understand how I should persuade to make the reader believe me. Also, to convince people. I understand what kind of ideas an emperor made to make his empire entertaining. Also, I know the way to write an essay.
4. I could have improved by writing even more. Also, I could have expanded more ideas to make my essay better. It would be much better if I used a lot of vocabulary words. Over all, I could have made my essay better.
5. I can apply this to the real world when I'm an adult because in university, I'll be writing essays. Also, probably I'll will be writing persuasive essays. When I write, I'll have to know what paragraphs I'm going to write. They include introduction, 3 bodies, and a conclusion. I will use some persuasive skills so that my teacher can see that my essay is really good.
This is my first draft.
Final draft.